חייבת דחוף לבדוק דקדוק או האם הניסוח תקין...
מי שמזהה טעות דקדוקית, פליז אני חייבת שתתריעו לפחות אם לא תתקנו ( כמובן שאני אשמח לתיקונים אבל גם רק זיהוי טעויות יכול להועיל )
And now, a few yaers later
Thinking about that pupil
Tring to write it, like a latter
Her thoughts about kinds of people
Looking at my past, my training.
The wonders, were like shiny evening
Brain is leading the emotion in heart
Making an effort, do it hard
See the reality like a poem
Which consist of part by part
This is the way, make successful
Coming unto your heart.
Today, you are going to be a good person
To your friends and for their says – to be listened.
For every difficulty, pay attention.
And make an effort to beautify the location.
Do your best,
To improve the reality
It's your test -
It's your personality.
ממש תודית!!!
